literature

cold smoke

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At these precarious hours in the morning,
As I open my eyes and I see you hovering at my door
Drenched in grey, as everything, you silently tell me
"It's time to go, for I have stayed too long".

Those hours who we valiantly fought against
Eventually won us over, and yet,
Although they take you away from me today,
I know that soon they will bring you back to me again.

There is nothing left to say now. Only the promises
Of fidelity and love in the icy morning with one last longing hug goodbye
As we press stale lips together you taste like cold smoke
And a bittersweet ending to the beginning of today.
not my best i know, but it came to me when i was cold and feeling solitary.

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melancholy-colonist's avatar
It's sad but beautiful. I especially love the last stanza.